wow, someone call the grammar police

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That was a brutal thing to read.

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That is just some straight up legit English right there

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For love of the love of god how bad can one person be at writting english, isn't this why we have internet translators

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the writing is worse than the art itself....

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This is English?

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Their writing is worse than BBMBBF's.

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The english isn't that bad, there's worse out there. But what's disturbing is the way their mouths are drawn, omg, it looks so much like those fuck pillows. o.O

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Cool, an up and coming artist. (Yeah, no pun intended but okay.) The art work is a bit rough, the facial expressions are a bit much and the english is...different. However, the artist has the basic concepts down (perspective foreshortening, etc.), the characters are very expressive and I think the settings and relationships show creative potential. I look forward to watching their style develop. Thanks for the gallery, loressan.

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English is a bit bad, but the story is good, but I also like the drawing style, eselente contribution.

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