not bad but it need some improvement keep up the good work

Base +6, Sushilicious +28, observer1980 +13, zapdor -5

It's not bad, however it skips far too much and can't be called rape a matter of seconds in. If it's meant to be mind break, it missed that by a mile too, show more of the story.

Base +1

it's nice that you colored all pages, but maybe you should focus more on the content, less skipping than on coloring

Base +7