This is a machine translation. I didn't translate this. It was auto-translated, and then I just fixed the grammar. Hopefully, we'll have a proper translation one day, but it's doubtful since it' been more than a year already.

"Accurate"? That pretty much shows you have no idea.

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can you tell me if that machine can be download in the web ?

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@pennington

then do a proper translation and release it

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not a bad idea, and not a bad attempt either. there were still quite a few lines that i thought any native English speaker wouldn't leave as they were, but i can't imagine what the machine must have spat out... I'm not too familair with the source this donjon comes from, but the way people spoke still sounded very "machine". you can tell it's machine translated, despite the efforts to correct grammar. all onomatopoeia and "yatta" have just been rendered into English, which doesn't really work unless you know the Japanese word as well... the edit work is adequate, although the way the text was placed in the bubbles was very bizarre, seemingly hastily done.

the story itself is standard "I order you to netorare while your pathetic would-be-lover squirms!", but the art is hot.

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Let's look at it from this angle.

If you knew Japanese, you'd have done a TL proper.

Since you apparently don't, there is NO WAY for you to know if it is accurate or not.

Am I not right?

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Don't flame the author, he disclosed it is a MT. If you don't like it, go and arrange fro a proper translation, or stare at the RAW.

I shrudder to think how many "translations" out there are MTs that are simply not annouced as such.

Also, pros and cons of MTs have been discussed on our forums, in the "Cove of Translators" section. I suggest that anybody interested in a more proper discussion goes there.

Also, to get a proper translation, consider posting a bounty. Through that system I've arranged for many dozens of translations...

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Well, it can't be called NTR i think. After initiation the user becomes brainwashed, so we have here 2 different persons. Before and after. It was always irritaiting for me in Darker tnan Black.

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Finally!! thanks, please more machine translation.

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Whoever complains about the translation is just being a whiny bitch. "Oh look at me, I have to spend hours and hours translating and yet you were able to come up with a script lickity split."

It's just jealousy. For spanking material the translation was perfect.

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awesome

I wait so long

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This isn't a bad translation. I know a little bit Japanese and when I checked at the raw, I can tell that this translation is quite accurate.

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you guys who does bitching probably doesnt do anything, so stfu and just enjoy it, or leave it

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God damn, and I usually hate ntr.

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@lamaig Actually no, its still in many ways the same person even after they "awaken." In the anime, ever after she turned into a contractor, she still made it clear that if she was to have a baby with anyone, it would be her boyfriend. Its just that their priorities and way of thinking is just switched around; the guy that she loves the most romantically is still the boyfriend, its just that romance is not all that important to her anymore.

Anyways, this hentai is freaking amazing, the art and execution is awesome.

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Booo Netoshit, I still dislike its concept and all it stands for.

Yeah that's right, came here JUST to say this and you read it.

Lastly t(-_-t) <---to all you downvoters

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I hope one with a better translation is uploaded sometime in the future.

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Damn this artist seriously has an insect fetish lol

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