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once again... its the fat, sweaty and rich middleaged man that gets the girl

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Well the story's not finished yet, and we don't even know what the hell is going on. There's a lot of dialog so...

and it's kinda refreshing to read about something other than the twerpy little kid rangling up a harem.

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This is good stuff !

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Ah, Katsurai Yoshiaki, why can't you write more of your happy stories?

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oh yeah! it not one chapter!

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I like this story its nice and happy!!!

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Not sure is this ntr looks like the guy doesn't give a rats ass about the girl hes dating which is good? It's hard to tell I know they are both going out so technically this is a double ntr situation on both sides? Or is the girl just a freaking idiot...

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First part, might be a trilogy.

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I thought I understood what was going on, but towards the end I got confused again .___.

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