Why is it so different from this version https://e-hentai.org/g/35176/ecfb24e259/ ? It's almost like the different story.

Base +15, HXW +6, yuripe +21, ceve4life +8, pop9 +27, pfniek +8, Raift +6

From just reading this version, it feels like it has been translated using a translation program...

Base +9, HXW +6, Nashrakh +12

Actually, I'm fairly sure it's just a crappy rewrite.

Base +11, HXW +6, D u b b y +9, ceve4life -8, pop9 -27, Shadow Weaver -53, Naive Priestess +1, pfniek -8, Nashrakh +12, NoNameNoBlame +26, ioctl +8, MeowMeowMeow +6, lotto09 +8, and 1 more...

i think this one has been translated using OCR...

Base +4, ceve4life -8

first one better better traanslate easy to get along

Base +3, ceve4life +8, sowerofash +6

Anyone can tell just by looking at the pictures that the translation is all wrong, both grammatically and in meaning. It's more like the translator just invented the new dialogue

Real version:

https://e-hentai.org/g/35176/ecfb24e259/

Base +4, lotto09 +8, sirlachdanan +9

If i knew this was a rewrite just from the name (which it really should include), I wouldn't have clicked it. Glad I was able to see the real version though.

Base +8