A long beautifully drawn and plotted story based off of the hit RPG Dragon Quest 5. Though I don't agree with it's moral, it's still one of my favorites and one of my toughest to translate and edit. I also must say I think this might be my longest and best release yet. Dragon Quest 5 is currently available for the NDS.

Fixed several over looked errors.

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why cant we have her as teh mistress in the game?... sigh

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@omgfglol Yeah, but you have to do adumb side quest to get her as your mistress. LoL

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Good dojin, but the script is sort of “eh.” Comic Sans is a terrible font choice, especially since it’s associated with rewrites. Typos and grammatical errors abound as well. Also, this isn’t really netorare, it’s just plain old adultery.

At least Flora/Nera has great tits!

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@rms141: I agree that people here tag any type of cheating as ntr, but he really did steal his wife

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lol... chastity protection.

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rms141 netorare IS any type of cheating, it also includes adultery and many more.

prettz, yes though it can be counted as netoru it can also be treated as netorare, because point of view is of the girls and in some netorare games you play through seeing girls POV more than the guys and it is still netorare. Since in this doujin the story is told not from the guy who does the stealing POV but from the girl's it can still be named netorare instead of netoru.

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it comes down to this, she is a NTR girl 寝取られゲー a term that was used before it just became ntr. netorare is a passive verb of NETORU meaning something is being taken from you (I think) yes the POV of the story is not NTR since its from the girl and nobody is stealing her lover and she is cheating on her lover, still she is a NTR girl.

people that like NTR tend to like the corruption that happens to the girl and something like this doujinshi draws that crowd and to simplify communication tag it as NTR.

anyone that played the game played the character that is steeling the wife XD so I guess this is more NETORU

Darknemo2000 hmmm I see your point. the netoru comment was more joke that did not come out well. If I really thought it was I would not be hear (hates netoru a lot) I think I'll just call this NTR girl for easy clarification. netorare is happening but from the lover being stolen POV.

as for this doujin the drawing are hot the story give me a ntr vibe and its in English so it's great for me =D

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Netorare is not 'any type of cheating'. The POV character needs to have their lover/target/etc stolen FROM them. If the main character is DOING the stealing it's not netorare.

Compare it to something in the 'tragedy' genre. If the main character dies miserably at the end, it's a tragedy. But if the 'bad guy' dies miserably at the end, SOMEONE is experiencing tragedy, but not the character the audience is expected to identify with. Netorare is the same.

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loving the artwork, please post more from this artist

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教える前に・・・・習ったほうが良いぞ！

It's NETORARE and NETORI, not NETORARE and NETORU. NETORI is the noun-form of the verb NETORU.

NETORI is the genre of wife-stealing (or girlfriend-stealing or whatever); NETORARE is the genre of having one's wife/girlfriend stolen. The female point-of-view usually falls into the latter.

Well, that's how this 日本人 understands it. Take it as you will.

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Hahaha look at the hero in page 9 lol

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THIS is fuckin' awesome! AHAHAH! Because really, The Hero is THAT awesome. Crispin is the same kind of sad sack loser as Kino from Chrono Trigger. When the main character aka The Hero/Chrono takes away their wife Nera/Ayla, I find myself laughing and cheering. I know this was meant to be kind of pitiful for Crispen, but dammit! He deserved it! Wasting my time in the Cavern of Fire, getting treated by Nera, recovering from burns, the best possible thing you can do to him is Marry Nera and laugh at the wedding. Dude was SO far out of his league it wasn't even funny. I assume we're SUPPOSED to feel bad...but, it's Crispen. Guy's a wuss. And better The Hero steals Nera from him than some disgusting fat pig of a slob.

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