raw https://e-hentai.org/g/50122/5049860395/

Shitty garbage like always

Base +9, pop9 -22, Limited -6, pollaco -5, Unholy_Razor +6, CGrascal +10, moo21 +1, RAGE1 -8, ezrewriter -10, Toot Oriole -3, The Archivist +5

come on...he's not that bad.
keep it on!!
thanks

Base +6, pfniek -6, Unholy_Razor -6, fredsmith4110 +8, CGrascal -10, grobe01 -7, moo21 -1, RAGE1 +8, ezrewriter +10, The Archivist -5, Hitsuyou-H -27

Yeah, man. Don't listen to this dude, he clearly has no imagination and is just a hentai snob.
Keep 'em coming.

Base +1, Unholy_Razor -6, moo21 -1, RAGE1 +8, ezrewriter +10, NoNameNoBlame -25, The Archivist -5, Hitsuyou-H -27

I think this guy wants to screw his own mom/sister. Judging by the fact that EVERY REWRITE HE MAKES IS INCESTUOUS. If not every, then about 9/10 times. Like, Jesus Christ. Talk about unfulfilled fantasies.

Base +1, fredsmith4110 -8, grobe01 +7, RAGE1 -8, ezrewriter -10, NoNameNoBlame +25, Hitsuyou-H -27

sigh.... this is why I dislike rewrites.... the original is about hypnosis and the mother's delusion, got the delusion part right but took out the important part about hypnosis making this incest..... sigh....

Base +9, moo21 +1, The Archivist +5, shinangels +9, Tochec +2

Great work like always EZ.

Base +5, The Archivist -5, Hitsuyou-H -27, yaoiboi +6

veelia - Why do you care? Jealous? Better post something yourself and only than open yar mouthsy.

Base +9, Hitsuyou-H -27, Tochec -2, yaoiboi +6