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Translation / Editing: bamboo

Not to sound harsh but the art is kind of....... meh :/

Like I said didn't mean to be harsh, just saying it like it is. I know that works like these aren't easy and are time consuming. The story is awesome though :D

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@PrivateEyes: Eh, I pretty much agree. =/

I do like the story, though. Hattori fisting herself and Etou experimenting with breast enlargement are interesting ideas. Actually burst out laughing a few times while I was translating. Like, I imagined page 15 with the anime's voices and it was awesome.

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Try to draw it yourself, Its not easy to do actually. Good art and story plot takes time to created.

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