Stupid story, +/- art...
*** (At least, not censored).
Atk

Base +2, rofloski -8, f4ce +1, Gesta1993 +1

The 3D model of the clothes clipping through the 3D model of the person doesn't count as "tearing through clothes". Also, some stuff is floating (like the breasts in the lying position) or positioned awkwardly (like the general poses and at some point the guy's thumb).

This could have benefited from more effort to actually become enjoyable. It feels done way too quickly as it is, and I can't really get any enjoyment out of it. Sadly, too much of this 3D type art is a rushjob.

Base +5, f4ce +1, tsacc +6

I personally liked this story, tought i agree that the renders could have been rendered with more care.

Base +6, f4ce +1