Raw https://e-hentai.org/s/447c579f1d/279901-10 for this grabage

Base +8, Madoushi -7, mr.scotty -7, ecojet84 -4, Hitsuyou-H +6, klonoa757 +7, hotstuffguy -6, SingleMalt +9, Muscular Beaver +6, Kuroguma +5, halrekas +1, Limited -7, sgc_geh +1, and 2 more...

Before anyone gets the wrong idea, I don't really support rewrites . . .

However, I don't support people calling the work anther has done garbage. Despite the fact that the quality is not as good as what the original may read, the writer took time and wrote out a story and tried to make it fit.

Everything marconii2002 wrote, except for "garbage," is fine, but "garbage" takes it too far.

Also, on a side note, don't try to get me with the, "He's stealing the work of the author . . ." so are we. Remember, someone originally paid for all the douginshis.

Base +7, Madoushi +7, olddog51 +7, mr.scotty +7, reggieob -9, ecojet84 +4, NoNameNoBlame +24, ThanatosNebula76 +3, SingleMalt -9, krisu +6, Mageta -9, Kuroguma -5, sinnano +5, and 6 more...

Great work like always EZ

Base +5, Mageta -9, Conquest101 -27, Kuroguma -5, halrekas +1, sgc_geh -1, yaoiboi +1

raw volume title: Kinshin Soukan Shikkin

Base +7