Translated by Ayane
http://doujinayane.blogspot.com

Comments, questions, suggestions, etc are welcome ^_^

oh sweet thanks for the upload hoping to download once the next one is translated and hopefully someone puts in a big pack lol

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Sure she feels good when he hits her cervix -_-

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Oh god yeah, I know I just about shit the bed when a dude hits my fucking cervix. #1 erogenous zone of all time.

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good art.. have noting to complain

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Subtle improvement. This is getting very good. I absolutely love Rin's international monolog, I can definitely hear it in her voice.

Art 7. Plot 8. Translation 6. True to character 8. All out of 10.

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