This is my face when I read the part where she actually wants to get pregnant by her own brother: >B|

This incest is fucking gross. FFUUU-
Who is this person rewriting everything and making it into incest and having a baby with your own sibling?
Doesn't know how to rewrite shit either. He makes it too obvious that she's enjoying it.
"OH YES CUM IN MY PUSSY BROTHER" "OH GOD THAT FEELS SO GOOD" "MY PUSSY FEELS SO GOOD HAVE MY BABY BROTHER"
RAGE, FFUUUU-

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I say we are bunch of perverts and nobody cares what you think is immoral! The harder, the better.
And I say die by horrible death all rewriters with your lousy dialogs and lousy characters that only screw up original story.

Howgh!

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/45ac20b03a/263747-2
English translation: https://e-hentai.org/s/675ea983e6/415105-7

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