I agree with Kingkaor - this was pretty hot. More people you check this one out and read it from start to finish if they haven't. There's some nice plotting and sense of humor at work here.
I imagine a lot of work went into making all these panels since it seems they probably had to struggle against the limitations of MS Paint or whatever other basic drawing/coloring app they used. Great job!
I like how it feels really germane to the Metroid universe instead of being more of just a straight sex piece and the "design/concept" of Ridley here really delivers for "the action"...
And BTW, there is a cover-art title page for this release (drawn by the same artist) out there as well (with a nude Samus holding a metroid in a light blue ocean). You guys you should seek that too if you want the complete thing...