NO there is not a page 511 it just skips

Imo one of the best stories out there, and great art to go with it. It makes you go through every emotion.
Touché Jay Naylor. Thanks for the upload. :D

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Defiantly a very good story even though the story it's self isn't really all that original it still has a original atmosphere to it. Quite compelling too.

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Where can download this whole comic (seriosly, i found this first time (and stupid me) i did not add this, i mean if i could buy this as a comic book i would

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Why are people praising the story? This is alright in the beginning but then it just spirals into insanity. Incest, pedophilia, abuse, and oh so much more before the "hero" goes off to the army so he can shoot things. Then he somehow gets in with an assassin group for no real reason other than for Naylor to show how awesome he is (hint: it is not).

EDIT: By beginning I meant the first few pages. Forgot how much this goes downhill so fast once Naylor's political opinions start to surface. Word to the wise, potential authors, no one likes it when you use your characters as a mouthpiece. Shout from a soapbox all you want but keep that crap away from what you write.

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The 1st 200 pages were the shit, the rest was shit

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im at 165 right now and its starting to lose its innocence, i think i should stop now while im ahead. Its getting a bit too depressing for my liking..

Still the first 100 or so pages were pretty great

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just two words... fucking awsome.

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The strawman argument on one of the early pages ruined for me. Also, the story has some good parts but is farfetched and has too much drama.

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First oddlight u take my mind out of my Head YES its FUCKING AWESOME! And Second redronnet i like Drama very much. And that is going to my last Point. Sliptree and shamful7 i Accent that u don't like it. But Not because the Comic is bad ... U don't like it because of Ur Charakter because u r an Otter Persons like me or oddlight everyone has another Charakter so u can say that u don't like it but Never say that it suck only because u don't like it. This is Not fair in front of the writer and the Fans or likers so pls think about Ur Command before u post it . Now first Jay thank u for that Comic, i like it very much. And i Hope u can publish it in the Future in Book Stores ^^ and now Good Luck and Have Fun in Ur Life very nice work.

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Amasing story, really has been making me think of these thngs and what if my life turned out like this. Would I follow Frisk path in life or take a different one, will i ever find someone for me, and what am i willing to risk for those i love.

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What the hell is up with 481 and 482? if your going to make an effort not to show it, and then show it, doesn't it seem a little piontless to put both of them in there. Otherwise, this was a really good comic.

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this is by far one of the best comics i have and most likely will read and i will read his other comic and i bet it will be one of the best as well as this one is however i wish mr. naylor would not make any more adultery comics for reading them and then this it makes me think of them in a whole new way but still perfect just perfect

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Wow. That's the best way to convey how I feel right now. I was on here, looking for stuff to fap to, and I came across this. I expected it to be another of Jay Naylor's furry hentai comics, but I was surprised to find that it was a legitimate comic. I read the entire story in one sitting, which I began over 5 hours ago. I've read good comics before, and even some pretty decent webcomics. But goddamn, this is easily one of my top 5 comics of all time, in any form. I applaud Mr. Naylor on making a very emotional and heartfelt story, full of fun, yet brimming with sensitivity. The last thing I expected to find on a hentai hunt.

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I am finding this really boring. No children act as mature as these kids do and it's annoying and slightly unsettling. The story is bland and I find myself not wanting to finish any of it.

It would have been somewhat tolerable if there was actual SEX involved in the comic, but the author decided to go with implied sexual relations instead of actually showing the action, which in this case hurt the comic tremendously.

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this is an amazing comic i spent 3 hours trying to finish the whole thing and it was worth it. is it possible to make a torrent so i can download it?

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this is excellent can someone make a torrent for this

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So this is the first time I've written a review on here. I thought this was an amazing comic. People complain about there being no sex but it doesn't need it. It was a very emotional story with a lot of twists along the way. Every time you think you know who's gonna be with who a wrench gets thrown in. I finished it all in one sitting, only stopping when I had to let my page views refresh. 5 out of 5.

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IMO Jay Naylor has always (and always will be) a top-notch 10/10 comic and story writer. His artwork is excellent and his arc creation and story writing skills are second to none. ALL the other comic and hentai writers all around the world should use Naylor as the perfect example of excellence and do their best to emulate him. He's just excellent

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so, I recently realized that jaynaylor.com is no longer a thing. Is there still an official site storing better days and OL?

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