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[Jay Naylor] Brooke Goes to College (WIP)

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Posted:2017-01-17 14:30
Parent:1014960
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:English  
File Size:1.81 MiB
Length:5 pages
Favorited:423 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.54
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Posted on 06 January 2017, 21:15 by:   H-Knight    PM
Score +16
(initial post, page 04)... Nice to see the continuation of Brooke's tale (pun intended ;> ).

Although, as a minor critique, I do hope a colorized version will follow, Brooke's comedic expressions are far better when complimented by her raccoon colors.

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[EDITED] ~ RE: same Brooke... It is likely it is the same Brooke from "Twice As Hot", since that ended with Brooke going off to college. But yes, it is difficult to tell since it is black-&-white for this h-comic; however, if you look closely at Brooke's tail, it is (faintly) ringed as a raccoon tail, also her hairstyle is the same. As I said, I hope a color version will come, so it will be easy to tell
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Last edited on 06 January 2017, 22:44.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 21:20 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +82
Well, Trump stuff aside, it's something new from Naylor. No NTR or incest so far, so good
Posted on 06 January 2017, 21:27 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +15
Hmmm... Okay, won't rate this comic yet. It is only setting up things here, a young racoon girl who I guess is the same Brooke from Twice as Hot posted here: https://e-hentai.org/g/860837/9b5b1aed92/
She discovers the potential of bisexuality with the college girls but gets thrown into reality instead.... Which is... Actually kind of funny if Naylor goes for the route I think this comic should go with. Like how Brooke tries to set things up with college girls but they all are either busy, not into it or just like the fat Tumblr user (triggering much?) and all Brooke has to suffice with her imaginations but even then she gets interupted one way or another.

---But that won't happen, right?
Posted on 06 January 2017, 21:39 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +13
@TheViktor

Are you sure they're the same girl? This Brook doesn't look like a raccoon.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 22:03 by:   SSSdriver    PM
Score +20
She really doesn't look like Brooke at all... Even when not colored, her markings should be there. She looks like a generic white cat now.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 22:09 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score +33
I can never take a comic seriously when they go for the low branches. A fat girl on tumblr complaining about "Trump's America?" Come on, this is porn, not Breitbart.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 22:39 by:   Neithanranger    PM
Score +216
@blakfyat The thing is, when pornography does comedic political references it's just for the fun of it. It's not like Marvel or DC comics where people may be swayed by the subtle (or not) political compass. In porn, noone's gonna say "Hmm, this is artist's views are similar to mine, guess I'll fap to his future work". In my opinion, you're taking the joke far too seriously by saying "I can never take a (porn) comic seriously when they go for the low branches" and I cannot help but think you're being oversensitive.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 23:07 by:   heiwen102rus    PM
Score +51
sry, yuri? Wow, jay, I was not ready for it.
Posted on 06 January 2017, 23:27 by:   YarnHorns~    PM
Score +14
I'm just gonna say it now, but if this story goes the way I think it will, we may have to question who Jay as a person is.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 00:30 by:   M0M0E    PM
Score +9
He's already working on this, when he hasn't finished "The Gift"? I'm guessing he's lost his little motivation
Posted on 07 January 2017, 01:50 by:   MetaSnake    PM
Score +30
Wait, I thought Naylor usually doesn't do Lesbian stuff.

Y'know what fuck it, Trump shit aside, this might actually have promise.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 02:40 by:   stealthg    PM
Score +22
Brooke.... FLEE, RUN, THAT ROOMMATE ISN'T WORTH IT.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 03:08 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +6
What if this girl isn't Brooke, and she's going to meet Brooke in a few pages?
Posted on 07 January 2017, 03:37 by:   Alagarazu    PM
Score +66
Wow, a Naylor comic that has potential to be funny, sexy and -not- feature the usual cheating/cuckolding stuff!? 2017 started great!
Posted on 07 January 2017, 07:50 by:   CrystalMendrilia    PM
Score +26
This is just cracking me up xD The Math part was golden.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 11:08 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +5
@ Muffdiver884

Well, I just assumed that it was Brooke from the other comic since she talked about asses and such that she was into.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 15:42 by:   SSSdriver    PM
Score +13
...Is that Audrey on page 4?
Oh please yes.
Posted on 07 January 2017, 16:22 by:   Commander Kickasss    PM
Score +32
"Yass"

fucking kill me
Posted on 07 January 2017, 17:38 by:   Wolvien    PM
Score -53
@Neithanranger

Your comparison isn't sound. Over on DC, Supes has to fight off smear campaigns Lex Luthor creates to make him look like an alien invader. On Marvel, the X-Men battle the expansion of the feudalist Shi'ar Empire or anti-mutant hate groups. Comics aren't political because they're propaganda (=a work meant to sway your political compass), they're political because their premises are inherently political.

Meanwhile, porn's sole purpose is to get you hot and bothered. It's exactly the opposite of inherently political.

And that's the big problem, you diminish your porn by injecting politics. How would you react if, for example, you're mid-fap in a porn vid, and -BAM- an emaciated trailerpark methhead comes on screen ranting about them wetbags takin' our jerbs? If you throw in a foreign element like political stereotypes you mar your comic's flow, the entire overall quality. It's no different here. ASSES ASSES ASSES VAJAYJAY -BAM- HUR HUR FAT TUMBLRINAS AMIRITE

You kinda ruin the point of porn if you inject imagery that kills your boner dead, is what I'm saying.

And that's coming from someone who got introduced to furry by Better Days. Then I found artists who didn't sabotage their own porn and could draw more than asses, dicks and vaginas competently.
Posted on 08 January 2017, 16:57 by:   alastor frost    PM
Score +61
@Neithanranger something tells me you haven't read a lot of Jay Naylor.
Plus, it's perfectly legit if people can't take political grandstanding seriously. In fact, I'd argue that it's EVEN MORE justified in a medium where it has no business to begin with.
Posted on 09 January 2017, 07:58 by:   Dos-Tree    PM
Score -72
"This is trump's america, I guess" coming from the landwhale on tumblr. Fuck, Jay, I'm supposed to hate you and every comic you make, not have a sensible chuckle and eagerly wait for more.
huh...some people are a bit bitter over the election results, it seems :^)
Last edited on 23 January 2017, 16:31.
Posted on 17 January 2017, 15:48 by:   blunt005    PM
Score +110
Cue people over analysing one fucking joke in a porn comic
Posted on 17 January 2017, 20:43 by:   RobDollar    PM
Score +22
"I've never had to COMPETE for a lover before!"
https://youtu.be/MVAUvm2PzFY?t=1m50s
Posted on 18 January 2017, 00:09 by:   Alagarazu    PM
Score +49
Oh my god, this comic... it's fun! I'm having fun with a Naylor comic!? Wh-what happened to reality!?
Posted on 21 January 2017, 13:14 by:   Wolvien    PM
Score +19
BTW, it's spelled "Ought." Aught is an archaic term that means "anything."

Knowing Naylor, that's no accidental typo. He spent the time before writing the script mining the See Also section of his Thesaurus to find big words he can use to sound smart, and then he mixed up the two words.
Posted on 31 January 2017, 04:13 by:   Vulpes Fennekin    PM
Score +17
A Jay Naylor comic with the potential to get me off and NOT bum me out? It must be my birthday or something!
Posted on 03 February 2017, 06:10 by:   sarevor    PM
Score +38
The fat tumblr user complaining about Trump was intentionally over the top and cliched. It's showing the type of setting the character is in.
It wasnt meant to be taken seriously...
Posted on 03 February 2017, 07:14 by:   MetaSnake    PM
Score +8
@sarevor

You need to understand; Most of us are jaded after the obnoxious, pretentiousness of the last few things Naylor has done. We know it's intended to be cliched, but that doesn't mean it's not annoying considering what we've dealt with. So far the comic shows promise, so long as Mr. Naylor doesn't start in with his usual pretentious BS, you'll see some happy comments flooding in.
Posted on 03 February 2017, 08:18 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score -18
@sarevor

Yeah. it's like what MetaSnake said. But at the same time, we are kind of worried or expecting this comic to become what Jay Naylor does to all of his comics. So we are expressing our hopes and desires that this comic will go for a more lighthearted parody that satirizes the cliches and plots that is almost expected in these furry college girl porn comics.

Maybe he is paid to do this comic this way, maybe he isn't. It IS possible for any professional to change directions that they were known for in the past. But we all know that it is mostly unlikely that it will happen.
Posted on 03 February 2017, 08:48 by:   Dr. Sloth    PM
Score +25
holy hell 6 pages in and there's already a political shitstorm in the comments section
jay naylor needs to go get a job in the media
Posted on 03 February 2017, 10:47 by:   RobDollar    PM
Score +19
Fear not! I'll turn the tide of this conversation away from the political!

"You have a lot of sex dreams. Were you abused as a child?"
O_o Uh... is that a thing? Sex dreams being a symptom of child abuse?

Discuss!
Posted on 03 February 2017, 11:40 by:   blakfayt    PM
Score -8
The people above me have said it best. I'm here to watch someone suck a dick, not fail at comedy.
Posted on 03 February 2017, 16:16 by:   Sourdough    PM
Score +12
Butt worship is my biggest fetish and Naylor does it so well. Can't wait to see more.
Posted on 03 February 2017, 16:50 by:   GeogreWillows    PM
Score +22
"You have a lot of sex dreams, were you abused as a child?"

That's actually a pretty fair question considering how horny this bitch is and the fact that she lives in a Naylor comic.
Posted on 07 February 2017, 17:46 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +14
It is pretty much amazing to see how everyone including myself is expecting to see how Naylor's other comic "The Gift" https://e-hentai.org/g/1027257/b86e4e8e68/ is going downhill with its... amazingly pretentious writing that claims to be "deep" when in reality it's in the lines of those abysmal "brainwash/mindbreaking" rape hentais you see on this site except with furries. It's like seeing Tommy Wiseau of "The Room" fame actually doing a porn comic... It is beautiful.

Then on the other hand, we get "Brooke Goes to College" a porn comic that seems to go with the satirical approach on Naylor's own writing and the classic setting of a college girl experiencing sex to the fullest that we do pray and hope that Naylor will try to keep on that path. It is rather ironic to see two complete opposite of one guy's works.
Posted on 09 February 2017, 01:27 by:   LordGr4    PM
Score +31
@TheViktor
I'm just here for the porn. I think people read waaaay to far into his writing. At this point he's either doing it on purpose or he's just delusional- either way it's pointless to bitch about it.
Posted on 09 February 2017, 01:53 by:   BlueRoses23    PM
Score +22
That reaction to a naked Mary (in the locker room) is 110% correct. Woof. ♡
Last edited on 09 February 2017, 11:12.
Posted on 09 February 2017, 06:45 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +8
@LordGr4
Where's the fun in that? That's the only reason to come the Naylor comment section. XD
Posted on 09 February 2017, 10:14 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +19
Exactly, Jay Naylor isn't exactly known to take criticism of any kind whatsoever XD
Posted on 09 February 2017, 21:00 by:   AnswerIsAlwayMiata    PM
Score +22
Hey chillout about that political joke , it's just 1 little speech balloon ^^
Posted on 22 February 2017, 08:37 by:   TheViktor    PM
Score +11
..........with the proper examination and fully educational deduction, I can fully and with most certainty come with this fully conclusion.

That is indeed a nice piece of ass.
Posted on 02 March 2017, 06:47 by:   Osprey    PM
Score +15
I'm finding this quite humorous.
Posted on 09 March 2017, 03:28 by:   Selvin369    PM
Score +6
Smooch the butt! Smooch the butt! Smooch the butt!
Posted on 10 March 2017, 15:15 by:   TommyTime    PM
Score +13
Fuck yes, the one thing that's been missing from Jay's work, Amazonian women, can't wait to see how this develops!
Posted on 29 March 2017, 16:03 by:   KamiWithAShortA    PM
Score -20
Boooo fuck the roommate.
Draw a sexy fat girl for once in your life Naylor you coward
Posted on 06 May 2017, 13:12 by:   YuJay    PM
Score +13
Would of been nice for this to be finish. :S
He seems to have moved on to 2 or 3 more comics since this one.

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