really liked it, hope you continue! a small issue i had tho was the speech bobble positions. you should almost always have the first line on the left, or make it more obvious wich to read first like you did in page 44.

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Nice work. I hope you improve on the faces. Thanks for images 61 & 62, we don't get a lot of those in futanari.

Last edited on 21 December 2016, 16:02.

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Is page 68 missing?

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Always appreciate the feedback thanks guys! All pages are shown on my gallery cg8, is there a vacant spot where 68 should go? Or does the transition just seem kinda mehh to you? This sequel is currently next on my to do list, and I am trying to work through an improved speech bubble method, currently playing around with putting the text in through a different program. Really appreciate the page-specific critique, keep it coming everyone!

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