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[Circe] Soreloser (in progress)

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Posted:2016-11-25 23:33
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Language:Japanese  
File Size:716.2 KiB
Length:2 pages
Favorited:187 times
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Posted on 26 November 2016, 04:45 by:   l4chuga    PM
Score +58
Really? Only 2 pages? With this weak ass start for a story, you probably should have waited til page 6 to post this.

EDIT: OK now we're getting somewhere, right at page 6.
Last edited on 28 November 2016, 12:52.
Posted on 27 November 2016, 03:46 by:   Azraelgt    PM
Score +33
This looks promising, thanks for sharing.
Last edited on 28 November 2016, 07:03.
Posted on 27 November 2016, 17:37 by:   BlackShadowKing    PM
Score +8
The style and art is done well
But the art alone isn't enough
There must be a cohesion story as well
I do hope that you live up to not just mine but everyone else's expectation
Posted on 28 November 2016, 02:53 by:   SuperSniperEagleMan    PM
Score +5
It's Sombra and Chrysalis. It's so obvious is ridiculous.

Come on creator of this comic. Unless you can pleasantly surprise me, you could try to make it a LITTLE less easy to guess what's going to happen.
Posted on 28 November 2016, 08:37 by:   bangayo    PM
Score +17
yay ! cute anthro ponies !
Posted on 28 November 2016, 23:52 by:   HamburgerHelper    PM
Score +69
I don't think there's enough SQUEEs in this comic. Could use, like, maybe ten more.
Posted on 29 November 2016, 05:44 by:   Leader of Chaos    PM
Score +51
I would bet 10 Hath and 500,000 credits on it involving spanking.

*Pages 11 - 14 come out.*
I called it, where's my credits.
Last edited on 02 December 2016, 04:38.
Posted on 02 December 2016, 00:20 by:   stllchlln    PM
Score +14
was hoping to see her get railed
Posted on 03 December 2016, 04:07 by:   smi256    PM
Score +7
@stllchlln It's never too late. TO BE CONTINUED!
@pg16
Posted on 08 December 2016, 00:06 by:   Runeless    PM
Score +17
This dude only does soankings. You're disappointed if you want anything else.
Posted on 08 December 2016, 04:45 by:   Leader of Chaos    PM
Score +9
(Page 26)
Dun Duun DUUUUN!
Plot twist.
Posted on 08 December 2016, 10:24 by:   ynot567    PM
Score +6
@I4chuga now's there's 26 pages as of last update, and the style seems to be improving more znd more, slow and steady wins the race
@BlackShadosKing screw expectations, just expect to see the unexpected and get over it
@SuperSniperEagleMan surprise it's not king sombra, nor queen chrysalis, it's the girl from the episode when rarity earns the yarn for her part of the key to the true form of the elements of harmony( you know the girl who stole rarity's design and she and her friends spend forever making new dresses and are virtually late on the day of presentation)
@sporzem it would be hilarious in an ironic state if rarity just looked at her in an annoyed state and said she got forth all on her own or some shit like that (not like it would matter in the end, shit like this don't usually stay to story)
Posted on 08 December 2016, 23:26 by:   GIGA-XIS    PM
Score +6
Ynot567 Um that mare was Suri Polomare and she looks a lot different from the mare in this story, plus if it was her Rarity would've recognized her immediately seeing how she knew Suri before that EP and immediately recognized her then. I think Suri was also disqualified for design stealing and attempted sabotage.
Posted on 09 December 2016, 11:25 by:   ynot567    PM
Score +6
Shes known as the element of generosity, not memory, plus the mare in the story wasnt humanized, no one would be able to recognize her without knowing the story beforehand, and lastly without color there is an even smaller possibility of recognition, but anyway, as pages 27, and 28 point out it was in manehatton, and so far only fashion show there (to memory) was that one, unless there was another one, or this one is completely fanbased timeline

Also if it sounds like arguing or a annoyed tone, its not supposed to sound like that, just self doubt, and questioning.
Posted on 09 December 2016, 20:41 by:   GIGA-XIS    PM
Score +6
@ynot567, While that might be true, Rarity clearly knew Suri the moment she saw her in the show personally before any of us ever saw her. And generally when something is humanized or anthrofied in this case, they retain some of their feral features to be able to identity them as said character and not an OC, that's just simple logic.

We'll have to see cause unless this mare was a background character chances are it's an OC. Still should be interesting to see how this goes now.

And you're fine there. :)
Posted on 10 December 2016, 23:48 by:   Jarvis_42    PM
Score +8
@page 31, LOL that will teach her to focus on form over function.
Posted on 12 December 2016, 21:47 by:   Mina lhan    PM
Score +12
The spanker pony is not Suri. She's called blue Nile and is a background pony from the episode Rarity take manehattan
Posted on 13 December 2016, 01:45 by:   ynot567    PM
Score +12
I was right bout the episode, but not correct bout the character...meh, either way, the drawings are great, and are still getting better as the artist goes deeper into the plot. :P
Posted on 13 December 2016, 19:48 by:   Jarvis_42    PM
Score +8
Rarity better hope that spinning drum doesnt catch the end of her tail. That could get painful.
Posted on 16 December 2016, 08:47 by:   tamiroff    PM
Score +9
From all POVs, Rarity looks, "simply fabulous". The course of this therapy is a pleasure to follow. I hope our therapist does a thorough job. By the way, Rarity's, obsessive, "Plain Jane" tormentor is also very cute..
Last edited on 16 December 2016, 09:22.
Posted on 16 December 2016, 17:50 by:   whade    PM
Score -8
Too much whining in the comments. Just enjoy the well-drawn spank fetish comic.
Posted on 16 December 2016, 19:56 by:   Derasit    PM
Score +5
I admit to desire that Rarity gets a right revenge after that! or maybe she will begin to like it and ask more spanking :P
Posted on 17 December 2016, 00:53 by:   tamiroff    PM
Score +9
Who sez Rarity's ass can't be beat? I, for one, would love to see more.
Posted on 17 December 2016, 02:03 by:   Derasit    PM
Score +4
mm Now.. the things of three times for whips/spank someone for revenge, remind me a VERY old movie called "mattie the goose-boy "
Posted on 20 December 2016, 23:52 by:   Foxtide888    PM
Score +16
I'm sure most people here probably don't care about my opinion, but... Circe's spanking fetish aside, this comic doesn't really make any sense. Sure Rarity is a drama queen that loves spas to no end. But the background of the story being that she supposedly won a contest with a dress she didn't make? She does almost nothing but make dresses. And the last thing she would do is enter a contest with someone elses like it was her own. sure she had help in making new dresses for the contest after she was cheated. But she still played fair. If Circe wanted to use a good character to get spanked, then why not that nasty mare who stole some of Rarity's special material and took credit for it in her own work and nearly ousted her? Spanking Rarity for making dresses might as well be spanking Applejack for telling the truth about everything and being a workaholic. And Rarity would never have been late for the contest if she hadn't had someone else take credit for some of her work and humiliated her. No this leather obsessed mare spanked and blamed the wrong person.
Posted on 19 July 2017, 11:43 by:   Derasit    PM
Score +5
Page 22: what happens usually to every artist on Deviant art / Furaffinity and socials?

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